Josh ([info]panaphobic) wrote,
@ 2006-03-13 16:52:00
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We've got Harpers... Maybe we should try for the Atlantic
This essay really sums up how I feel about a tremendous plurality of writing these days, and why I feel like I've retreated from fiction generally.
I know it might be reactionary in how conservative it is, and I'd hate to think that it's because I'm getting older that I might appreciate more things, but there are two traits that I really don't tend to enjoy in fiction— those pieces that try to force through a boorish vision of "this is the way things are, and I've written this to prove it," and those pieces that prize ambiguity and ornamentation as goals in and of themselves. I know that things often end up written or drawn or printed because they looked cool and tickled the fancy of whoever created them, but that doesn't necessarily do anything for me. I think for too long, I've dismissed a lot of analysis of literature because of a high school teacher who insisted that every moment of Dr. Jeckyl and Mr. Hyde was planned and positioned perfectly. I remember thinking that just because there's a house with a slanted roof doesn't mean that it's an allegory for the ego-id-super ego (she'd make a triangle with her fingers, just like when Stevenson has some scene that involved a steeple).
On the other hand, I know that there really are things worth looking for in fiction, and that the things that affect me tend to be images that reflect how a character is percieving his or her surroundings, not the author. Authors are people and I give far less of a shit about them than I do a good character in service of a book. When an author sets out to tell me what they think, it's almost always far less interesting than seeing what a character would think in the same situation, especially if it's backed up by something.



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Oi!
[info]lovecrafty
2006-03-13 10:32 pm UTC (link)
Wow. I tend to avoid anything labelled as literature - I tend towards favoring "workmanlike prose" - and that article really did a good job of summing up why I so dislike "literary writing". So many of those samples were just so attrocious. Like this:

[They] walked off in separate directions through the chaparral to stand spraddlelegged clutching their knees and vomiting. The browsing horses jerked their heads up. It was no sound they'd ever heard before. In the gray twilight those retchings seemed to echo like the calls of some rude provisional species loosed upon that waste. Something imperfect and malformed lodged in the heart of being. A thing smirking deep in the eyes of grace itself like a gorgon in an autumn pool. (All the Pretty Horses)


To me, that is all "literary writing". It's "gorgons in autumn pools" and other nonsense that makes you cringe. I don't understand how these people take themselves seriously. Honestly, I think it's an Emperor's New Clothes effect. I think the more appreciative of a line like "gorgons in autumn pools" you are, the dumber you probably are.

Give me a Jim Thompson crime novel over that sort of nonsense any day. You take a paragraph like this:
For a long moment, a silent second-long eternity, Lily sat staring at her son. Looking into eyes eyes that were her eyes, meeting a look as level as her own. So much alike, she thought, and the thought was also his. Why can't I make him understand? she thought. And he thought, Why can't I make her understand? (The Grifters)

Now that, that is good writing. That's neither boring and flat, nor it it so obtuse that it leaves you scratching your head in puzzlement if you stop to think about it. But Jim Thompson is a "hack" who writes "trashy genre fiction". Such silliness.

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Re: Oi!
[info]panaphobic
2006-03-13 11:02 pm UTC (link)
Well, you're better off not trottin' that around me. I grew up on Jim Thompson (and am willing to admit that quite a few of his books suffer from leaden prose, especially women's dialogue), and still love him. Even The Killer Inside Me, which is full of bizarely terrible moments, has such an incredible plot and such a sense of pacing that I can totally ignore the often clumsy or cliche points. And Pop. 1280 is such an incredibly well-set story, the humor is so dry and, I dunno, exists without needing to announce HERE IS A PUNCHLINE, that I can't help but go back to it over and over. The deadpan bit that it opens with, describing how he could hardly finish his, what, 12 strips of bacon and eight eggs or somesuch is so goddamned economical and smart that I'd take it over any number of bullshit stories that I've seen in the last five years.

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Re: Oi!
[info]lovecrafty
2006-03-13 11:20 pm UTC (link)
Pop. 1280 is in my top five for best books of all time. That book is freaking amazing.

I didn't mean to imply I thought Thompson was hack genre writer. I think he's one of the most important writers of all time, I was just echoing the damning criticism I've read of him in more "highbrow" sources. Or sometimes you get these critics who damn him with faint praise, as if it were somehow strange that a lowly crime fiction writer could produce such art.

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